My wife came up with a quote for her hairstyling buisness, she's wondering if it sounds good. be honest?

Style that wows, color that shouts! Every hair counts!
My wife came up with a quote for her hairstyling buisness, she's wondering if it sounds good. be honest?
sorta..i just dont like the wow part


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My wife came up with a quote for her hairstyling buisness, she's wondering if it sounds good. be honest?
no good
Reply:on a scale to 1 to 10 I would say a 4 for effort
Reply:its catchy and nott too tacky i like it!!!


Good Luck with the bizz!!!


Maybe switch it around too





color that wows, style that shouts, every hair counts....


i think that sounds better
Reply:nah
Reply:The quote is really good.[ :) ]
Reply:umm sort of it wouldnt do it for me i wouldnt want to walk in there it wouldnt grab me
Reply:not really. how about something thats like, make your hairstyel say wow! make your color shout! make every hair count.
Reply:i agree. the wow part doesnt flow right. also it's kinda long. maybe just try every hair counts! that's cute and says a lot in a little amount of words. too many words will confuse ppl. good luck!
Reply:take of "every hair counts", and it sounds better.
Reply:I'd say it's very loud and funny....but I like it anyway...haha..!
Reply:i like the first two phrases it sounds rhyming but "every hair counts" it's trashy to be honest.......
Reply:It sounds really great although you could leave out the last line as the first two lines are really wows me and the last line makes the quote look long. Good luck!
Reply:Like some people above said, wow doesn't flow right. And its kinda long. But its catchy yet not tacky.


Good luck with the biz!
Reply:Tone it down a bit. Hair is Hair, not a Broadway Musical production advertisement.





Hair should be impeccably coiffed, natural looking, and if properly combed, every hair WILL be counted for. She cannot POSSIBLY keep her promise that every hair counts as it means nothing in the grand scheme of things. And hair should NEVER shout.
Reply:booooooooooooo! sounds commercial. how bout. styles that are now, colors that are hot, everyone wants the stylist weve got! lol i tried
Reply:i'm not fond of it. stylish cuts, great colors works just as good and in advertising you get charged per word, so short and sweet works too.
Reply:In most cases, you would want to go for something a bit shorter. My suggestion, working strictly with what you put down and going against a few other suggestions, would be to use, "Every hair counts!" It's short and gets the point across effectively with a minimal use of words. Shorter is cheaper and easier to remember.
Reply:I agree with the others,it's just not catchy enough.In the town I grew up in,the local barber had a great one,and it has stuck with me all these years.This was his slogan; " I need your head for my business"! I doubt it would work for a salon but if you can get something catchy and different like that, then your golden.
Reply:nah its kinda cheesy sorry

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